Duskit's+born

I have opened my eyes, my brother, Redkit and I have been in the nursery for 5 moons. Our mother Silkcloud and our father, Waspstar, the leader was proud of me when I tried to help the elders nest but I was too weak to carry things. My brother Redkit and I were now 6 moon old and ready to become an apprentice. Redkit wants to be a learn to be the best warrior. Everyday, Waspstar teaches us at least 2 moves of fighting skills everyday. For some reason, I always know what my opponent is going to do and Redkit always can listen and walk into other clans dream. We told to Flametail, our medicine cat about our powers. He tested us first and we all pass. He was surprised and told Redkit to be his apprentice. He agreed and we heard, " Let the cats old enough to catch their own prey to come sit by the mossy rock!" We were so excited, "Today we have 2 kits are old enough to be an apprentice,!"" First Duskiness, you are now Duskpaw. I shall mentor Duskpaw myself! Flametail, you have been waiting for an apprentice, Redkit is now Redpaw. Flametail will show his skills from Littlecloud." We touched noses, my father said to me, " Please let me be proud of you!" I have trained hard and I have got my warrior name" I have seen Duskpaws ability have pass the test, now you shall get your warrior name."" Duskpaw, I have mentored you well for now on you shall be called Duskwing!" " DUSKWING, DUSKWING!" I have found my self a mate!